Wednesday, January 21, 2015

the calm sea

this is for
Thursday Poets Rally Week 79: January 14-January 27, 2015 (5th anniversary celebration)

Happy Rally!


the Pacific ocean celebrates itself,
and pushes waves of emotions,
and what we see may not what we know,
for beneath every atom inside the water,
lives unsettled fish and detective eyes,
the seagull patrols and comforts troubled souls,
the western coast tilts its head
in graceful attitude 
obtaining a branch of Navy guards.






17 comments:

Roessel Morton Celeste Nicholas Thornton said...

cute, wow.

Linda Eugenia Denise Brin Korbetis said...

incredible imagery.

Marissa Biden Sergey Christina Murphy said...

seaside walk is always interesting.

Fatiha Kabena Storm Snyder Brothers said...

interesting.

;)

Madeline Terry Camille Nat Brownback said...

shiny color, very uplifting imagery.

Carolina Sebastian Walker Inhofe Martinez said...

handsome.

Iremonger Marty JacoBus Quinlan Pickens said...

impressive.

:)

Herbert Rick Buffet Robert Levatich said...

impressive.

Cindy Gary Murray Tomblin Bullock said...

yes,

Jeanne Elena Owen-Mihaltses Henneberry said...

beautiful imagery there.

kora-leah meet faust wilson said...

when we think more aptly, we do carry it out in our writing.

Malia Butterfly Detroit Lawrence Page said...

terrific piece.

Skylar Whetstone Hayley Bollag Romney said...

a calm sea is very stunning in view.

Anne Emerson Sharp Block Bloomberg said...

hurry,
lovely imagery.

Susan Rafael Otter Jolie Nixon said...

cute, and delightful imagery.

Catie Mead Williams Handcock Robinson said...

wink, cheers.

Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Shapirol said...

nice.